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FCA’s                                                                                                             Haaziq Daniels

Descriptive detail                                                                                            November 4, 2011

Flashback                                                                                                        English 6-2

Dialogue                                                                                                          Personal Narrative   

 

It was all me

            “It’s was all me!”  We would have won if the line was blocking, the quarterback was blocking and I wasn’t stumbling out the backfield. 

           

            “They were blocking, you just weren’t running well today.”

            “Ok fine when we have practice tomorrow we’ll see,” I screamed.

            The next day at practice my coach said there was a tape.  He also said, that “Mrs. Raia Ronnie’s mom taped the game.” We went into the trailer room and started to watch the game.

            Halfway through the game I saw that I was slow off the ball and on one play I was running to the outside I was going slower than usual; and the line was blocking as well as they could.  In the fourth quarter the line was blocking and good, and I was getting talked, hit hard and ruining slow almost every play. My coach said you see what I'm talking about the line was blocking well, you just weren’t running well. 

            “Sorry, I said.”  I figured I owed him an apology and just needed a break.

            “It’s ok he, just don’t you ever let it happen again,” he answered.

            This is a lesson that I have learned from that day on I never disrespected my coach or teammates again.  So once gain I say again to never blame someone for my problems. And lastly to always ask for a break when I am tired.